Tuesday, 13 June 2017


One day the most horrible day of the year cross country day. It’s the most horrible day of the year because I get so sweaty, it is like drowning in a pool of sweat. 

After cross country my owner chucks me in the washing machine. I whirled and twirled around. Once I got out of that torturing device I then got hung on the washing line to dry.  I hear my owner’s mother call bed time, everything goes black.

l hear sounds of the door being pulled open after a horrifying 6 hours of creepiness. I feel relief that it is a new day and my owner will wear me once again.

In my writing I took a lot of time to write the second to last sentence because I wanted it to have detail.

Next time I could use more wow words .

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